Saturday 13 July 2013

Insecure...


Indeed, I love you
Do you really love me?
I am insecure


20 comments:

  1. Excellent take on the prompt...
    love it.
    Peace
    Siggi

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  2. Sweet senryu. Emotions definitely swing when insecure in love!

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  3. Somehow, this kind of a feeling should be worked upon..why should one feel insecure...Loving means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is...You love..pure and pious..that should be enough..a heart filled with pure love can never feel insecure..

    A nice Haiku..and I couldn't help but speak...hope it's taken in good spirit..

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    1. Thanks sir... For sharing your thoughts...

      I also agree that love means means not expecting one to be the way one want..accepting the person the way the person is...
      But nobody can deny that every relationship goes through this phase.. Knowingly or unknowingly... And sir.. I believe that the strongest will survive...

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  4. I don't know yet I am tempted to try my version..yes, you inspired it...

    Indeed I love you
    and I know it from my heart;
    strong and secure Me...

    RS:)

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    1. Now I am all smiles sir...
      Because my writing inspired another writer..
      And I thank you a lot for your haiku..
      It portrays a matured love.. Whereas mine is a more child-like love... :)

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  5. I can very much relate to this! Great job!

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    1. Thanks a ton Mindlovemisery...
      My pleasure :)

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  6. The moods swinging wildly here!! :) Nicely done!!

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  7. True love will always be there, so don't be insecure :-P

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