Monday, 14 July 2014

Drive

Drive safe, she pleaded
You didn't. Wore no helmet.
Head smashed. Very Grave
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You drive me crazy
With your unbound love and care
Wow! I feel blessed

PS: Thanks Haiku Horizons for this wonderful prompt - Drive

26 comments:

  1. that is a good kinda crazy in that second one...
    the first...ouch...see a couple of those wrecks
    not pretty at all...

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  2. Lovely take! Super contractions though :)

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  3. Lovely haiku, especially the second one..

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  4. The first so tragic, the last romantic! Love them both. You rocked this prompt on all angles.

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  5. Two takes on the prompt, both from vastly different perspectives!

    Driven into Tender Flesh

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  6. I could never understand why people drive without a helmet -- so sad. But the second is so sweet!
    Great post :)

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  7. Both are awesome, Satya, though conveying opposite thoughts.

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  8. loved both but the second one a bit more! Sometimes craziness is sign of a deep love :)

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  9. a wonderful pair ! and the second one is so lovely !

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  10. Very suitable for the present.

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  11. From despair to bliss. Delightful contrast.

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  12. Loved both the takes Satya, sorrow and joy, well balanced.

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