tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post8209901715000890343..comments2024-03-03T20:34:54.497+05:30Comments on locomente...: Crumbled PaperLocomentehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08173005313179202281noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-70390342597647797452016-04-09T09:18:36.197+05:302016-04-09T09:18:36.197+05:30Wonderful expression of the broken heart. Simple a...Wonderful expression of the broken heart. Simple and perfectly told. Jus' loved it.Rathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14621417958017949084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-87005131642013316912016-04-09T02:41:02.547+05:302016-04-09T02:41:02.547+05:30the journey of life, beautifully summed up!!the journey of life, beautifully summed up!!Reshmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01640435257765195374noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-57988051223163403052016-04-06T22:36:57.045+05:302016-04-06T22:36:57.045+05:30Perhaps someone got a better script to rewrite and...Perhaps someone got a better script to rewrite and crumbled papers isn’t a way of disregard, but a step forward in reaching that height! Nice thought Jeevanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14063201530500784222noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-28141282889942039722016-04-06T02:20:53.282+05:302016-04-06T02:20:53.282+05:30This is not just the story of paper, but also how ...This is not just the story of paper, but also how we are betrayed by some in life ... very well expressed :-)Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-4161947498140908422016-04-05T15:00:43.340+05:302016-04-05T15:00:43.340+05:30After using throwing wastebin. Now a days it is co...After using throwing wastebin. Now a days it is common.Nice.rudraprayagahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13775039913655864157noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-54161804927543733792016-04-05T14:55:25.059+05:302016-04-05T14:55:25.059+05:30Sometimes the crumbled papers contain the best sto...Sometimes the crumbled papers contain the best stories, untoldM'Bai Madrasihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13892481269775523000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-36059450445749150142016-04-04T16:07:12.419+05:302016-04-04T16:07:12.419+05:30What a tragic love story, but this happens in real...What a tragic love story, but this happens in real life for sure. In few lines you have managed to channel some powerful emotions. This is a great write! :)kelvin s.m.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02591849636814413110noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-16188455861619967652016-04-04T13:42:34.316+05:302016-04-04T13:42:34.316+05:30Though crumpled, now you no more remain as plain.....Though crumpled, now you no more remain as plain.. good or sad u got something!favshireenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17065197265497023954noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-85379632468247115662016-04-04T07:59:31.454+05:302016-04-04T07:59:31.454+05:30Whatever happens happens for good! The words canno...Whatever happens happens for good! The words cannot be erased from the heart...Sandhyahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06478831923010850316noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-68660534046138061122016-04-04T07:10:42.219+05:302016-04-04T07:10:42.219+05:30He giveth and he taketh...the value is in our own ...He giveth and he taketh...the value is in our own perception of worth. It hurts to be crumpled and thrown in a corner...Truedessahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09079953417572207613noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-38182467589783485922016-04-04T04:26:25.442+05:302016-04-04T04:26:25.442+05:30A beautiful metaphor which I relate!
Donna@Living...A beautiful metaphor which I relate!<br /><br />Donna@LivingFromHappinessDonnahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13420133886162844400noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-49882662017751758212016-04-04T03:15:29.885+05:302016-04-04T03:15:29.885+05:30*****
Zq*****<br />ZqZQhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08521836993023109556noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-18917793054362324942016-04-04T01:23:02.979+05:302016-04-04T01:23:02.979+05:30Such a powerful metaphor here. Much said in a shor...Such a powerful metaphor here. Much said in a short poem....great writing!Carrie Van Hornhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11715648073882529202noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-57819490493665502042016-04-03T21:42:29.276+05:302016-04-03T21:42:29.276+05:30Ouch. Painfully descriptive metaphor...works wonde...Ouch. Painfully descriptive metaphor...works wonderfully!C.C.https://www.blogger.com/profile/16393100446679896378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-39359548973928170712016-04-03T21:29:54.828+05:302016-04-03T21:29:54.828+05:30May be the story is not worth the paper it is writ...May be the story is not worth the paper it is written on.SGhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05790347071764332430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-11488608460318558742016-04-03T20:39:51.112+05:302016-04-03T20:39:51.112+05:30That sounds very sad. Once that paper stands up an...That sounds very sad. Once that paper stands up and uncle plus itself, it will move on to write a happier story. Trust me, I know these things, smiles.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-72398789020984678992016-04-03T17:37:45.586+05:302016-04-03T17:37:45.586+05:30Very effective metaphor.Very effective metaphor.Rosemary Nissen-Wadehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05913841031559499568noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-48280980335245937482016-04-03T17:21:07.839+05:302016-04-03T17:21:07.839+05:30What a parallel there is to life here. We are form...What a parallel there is to life here. We are formed, develop, achieve, then sadly become nothing again.Old Egghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14727444489103758018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-9598644939176697692016-04-03T15:08:43.806+05:302016-04-03T15:08:43.806+05:30Powerful write..!Powerful write..!Sanaa Rizvihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06681404650477409830noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-24477164536462913212016-04-03T14:18:46.429+05:302016-04-03T14:18:46.429+05:30I wonder why this crumpling, story not good? It...I wonder why this crumpling, story not good? It's better to die than living a devalued life....Sumana Royhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17333363799083094084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8232805004810427151.post-71214920177380556492016-04-03T14:08:49.780+05:302016-04-03T14:08:49.780+05:30Crisp and sharp - that torn paper sings like a bro...Crisp and sharp - that torn paper sings like a broken heartJae Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11509244123008832611noreply@blogger.com