This is a good expression, a nice thought..on a beautiful journey.. but you may like to look at syllables if you want it to be a haiku.. Thanks!!!
Lovely words and creative expression ~ this Haiku site looks for the 5-7-5 syllables, 3 lines ~ although there are many types of haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^
In other words, you and the sea share certain similarities!“Six Takes on ‘Seashore’”