Friday 13 April 2012

Warmth


The melting warmth I feel
When my mother draws me close to her
And shelters from World

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  1. Nothin comparable to a mother's warmth! Very nice..

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  2. Mother's love and warmth always protect and shelter us!!! Nice haiku!
    Well done!!!

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  3. There is no warmth or safety to equal that found in the arms of a mother.

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  4. This is really beautiful! But as per rules of haiku, syllable count is more than required:)

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  5. Good thought..very nice.. but as Tarang has mentioned..you may like to look at syllable and reduce a few words...

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  6. Nothing compared to this warmth.Beautiful words. :)

    Alcina-Afixxion Addixt

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