Thursday, 27 September 2012

I carry you within



Ah! You are my first love
You left your footprints in my heart
I carry you within

No, I do not miss you
I feel your presence around
I carry you within

As a part of Haiku Challenge

5 comments:

  1. A beautifully romantic haiku. "I carry you within" I like that very much :-)

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  2. Beautifully written. It's very romantic, but a little sad.

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  3. I enjoyed this - I like the two haiku together here: the repetition works well.

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  4. Those who leave footprints in our heart influence us deeply...

    Footprint

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