Sunday, 28 October 2012

I wish you were there


Oh yes!
It is hurting
Really tempting
I feel like talking
At least messaging
But I am controlling
Don’t know how long I can keep going
Your memories are haunting
It is really tormenting
I can envision you smiling
Oh! That is really charming
How can I stop myself from loving?
You are very enticing
I can’t stop admiring
You are my everything
You may not be there consoling
But you will always remain appealing
After all, you taught me what is loving
Also what is sharing and caring
Then, adjusting and accepting
I wish you were beside me, beaming

14 comments:

  1. Wow ... what a wonderful rhyming poem ... superbly done !!!

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    1. Thanks Green Speck... Ur comments are always encouraging...

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  2. Beautifully written,Satya :)

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  3. Sometimes things have their own way of working out. Glad to see you inn Poetry Pantry today. Welcome.

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  4. Yes, yes, yes... so relatable and heart wrenching..

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  5. It sounds like first love and we never forget that one and how it felt.

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  6. The back-and-forth here effectively communicates the mixed emotions some relationships elicit.

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