Did you say those words?
They cut me into pieces
And I wanted to be reduced to ashes
I loved you by all means
But all I received back was your
hurting words
Dear you, it pricks; it kills
And my heart aches
Droplets rolling down my eyes
Yes, such were your words
Those words were poisonous
And it transversed me to nothingness
Now my heart carries emptiness
It has forgotten the awesomeness
All I carry is bitterness
Because of your heartlessness
U may pray for forgiveness
But I don’t carry any Godliness
Hey wait! Never throw such words with
callousness
It is very venomous
Sad, but beautifully expressed poem! Loved the last stanza....
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DeleteWhoa.. those were power packed words that said a lot about the effects 'some' words can have on us. Beautiful flow!
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DeleteA tale of true disappointment and hurt. Thanks for sharing at Verse First.
ReplyDeleteOne can feel the hurt in this poem. Yes, it would be hard to forgive such an attack. Grrrrrr.
ReplyDeleteTrue..
DeleteThanks Sherry :)
Indeed. Insults thrown for no other reason than to burn can reduce a bridge to ashes in mere seconds. Very honest and very moving. Well done.
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ReplyDeleteawesome..so nicely expressed....
Thanks a lot!
DeleteI can relate to this.... :(
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed the flowing of this poem. Like an ocean of melancholy.
Thanks a lot! :)
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