Tuesday, 19 March 2013

For the Fifty Years and Forever!



I held her hands
And led to the dark room
“Clandestine affair”, she commented
“Hold your breath”, I said
Then, I hugged her tight
Pecked on her cheeks
Her big eyes showed surprise
When I whispered, “Golden jubilee, it is!”
Then, I slid a gold ring into her wrinkled fingers
Her eyes shone with tears. She said,
“I love you, for the fifty years and forever!”


8 comments:

  1. How romantic! Beautiful poem and thank you for the inspiration this week.

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    1. Thanks a lot...
      Pleasure is mine :)

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  2. Nice and suspenseful there for a minute. Very nice use of the prompt. (My folk got into the bedroom too!!)
    This is nice that they had their 50th. Could it be a true bit of your life? Mrs. Jim and I had our 40th in February. We might not live ten more as we are old.

    Thank you for this nice prompt word, Satya, it was a fun write.
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    1. Thanks a lot Jim...
      I am so very happy to know that you celebrated your 40th anniversary with Mrs Jim..
      I pray that God gives you good health and let you celebrate the golden jubilee hand in hand....

      Between...
      This is not a true account... I am too young for a marriage and still waiting for my Price!!

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  3. beautiful - there can still be a spark after 50
    Thanks for writing such a romantic and hopeful piece

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