Thursday, 4 April 2013

Life seemed perfect!



Oh! The night was silent
Except for the noise of drones
And their rhythmic breathing

They hesitated.
Then, entwined their fingers
Life seemed perfect!

As a part of Haiku Challenge

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6 comments:

  1. Gemma WisemanApril 04, 2013 11:00 am

    Wonderful atmosphere in these haiku! Beautiful!

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  2. AnonymousApril 04, 2013 11:35 am

    Wonderful imagery within your words

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  3. Amrit SinhaApril 04, 2013 1:24 pm

    Your romantic stories are always so sweet !!!

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  4. Sri ValliApril 04, 2013 2:57 pm

    You can write romantic haiku out of any given prompt! :D :)
    Well done Satya!

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  5. Ramesh SoodApril 04, 2013 7:47 pm

    Indeed...wow!!!

    RS

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  6. joanneApril 04, 2013 11:17 pm

    rather moody and mysterious....nice

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