Monday, 10 June 2013

Oh Please...


Oh please
Oh please
I begged
But you never listened
You heard my cries
Yet you walked away
I was crushed
You didn’t care
Still I begged
Oh please
Oh please
But you didn’t look back


20 comments:

  1. Some kinds of moving we wish would not happen - but when the other has moved on, one must inevitably do likewise.

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    1. Sometimes it is better to move on!

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  2. I always say "His loss!" in such cases! I remember, though, it does really hurt. But just wait.....you may not think so now, but even greater happiness lies up ahead just waiting for you!

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  3. Some people can't hear the others because they are not prepared yet.Great piece!

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  4. So sad! In time one realizes, it's best to keep moving on!

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  5. Great poem, really hard hitting and full of emotion. I could feel the pain.

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  6. That moment becomes very difficult

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  7. That is a difficult moment to deal with indeed. Sad one, Loco.

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  8. I felt your pain.
    Dropping by from Verse First linkup.

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