Saturday, 6 July 2013

Dreams washed out...


My dreams are washed out
Like mighty waves hitting sand
Washing out imprints


21 comments:

  1. Sad! But loved the expression in haiku!

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  2. Very poignant.Conveys so much in so little.

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  3. read your comments Satya. My Haiku is similar to the one written by you. Pl. Check ,I had posted it at no 2 after and your post is at no 45.

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    1. Dear Kalpana...
      I didnt intend to offend you...
      I just wanted to say that our haiku portrays same meaning...
      If you took that offensively... I apologise...
      And deeply regret for dropping by...

      And your comment is ridiculous.

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    2. I am sorry, Satya.I misundersyood you.Please do not say that you regret dropping by. This defeats the purpose of poetry which is so beautiful.

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  4. Sometimes, this outcome--this erasure--is highly desireable; sometimes tragic. Well done.

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  5. Imprints washed away
    Mighty sea waves lash on sand
    Dreams are locked in thoughts

    Dream on to fulfill that cherished desire!!
    Cheers!!

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  6. Sorry to hear about your washed away dreams. Well expressed.

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  7. You have expressed tragedy and loss gorgeously

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  8. Lovely! Mighty waves do wash the imprints on the sands. Sad

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