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“Agnes, don’t run. Come, hold my
hands”, Ashley told to her six years old daughter.
But Agnes was not ready to listen. She was enjoying the theme park; a world free
from the sounds of honks... bustling
vehicles... busy people.
She was giggling as Ashley chased
her.
Then, she stood frozen with a
death-stuck face.
Ashley found silent tears kissing
her girl’s cheeks. She pondered for reasons. A giant insect model grabbed
her attention.
Ashley walked towards the insect model
and hit it.
Agnes smiled and kissed her mother.
Then wiping the tears she started walking holding her mother’s hand.
Mother makes everything better. For a while anyway. Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteVery true...
DeleteThanks Sandra :)
That little antic probably saved her from hours of crying. Great Story.
ReplyDeleteTrue...
DeleteThanks :)
So sweet. A nice touch with the ending.
ReplyDeleteThanks a ton! :)
DeleteQuick thinking on Mom's part. Trying to explain probably wouldn't have worked.
ReplyDeletejanet
Indeed...
DeleteThanks Janet :)
Dear L,
ReplyDeleteI found when my children were small my mommy kiss cured everything. Cute story.
shalom,
Rochelle
Thanks Shalom...
DeleteFor the amazing prompt and beautiful comments :)
Dear Locomente,
ReplyDeleteA very cute story with a happy and tender ending. Good job.
Aloha,
Doug
Thanks Aloha :)
DeleteA child's carefree attitude can change in an instant.
ReplyDeleteThanks Dobson :)
DeleteThey want to be so independent! Cute story. I liked the "silent tears" kissing her cheeks.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Pattisjarrett...
DeleteFor dropping by and pouring comments! :)
I'm glad Mommy saved the day! Sorry I'm late, still getting through last week's stories...
ReplyDeleteAh! Thats ok...
DeleteBetter late than never, they say...
Thanks a ton :)