Saturday, 28 September 2013

Damp Pillow...


Tears flowed down her cheeks
His memories evaded
Pillow became damp

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  1. Yes, pillow does get dampened... .it happens.....

    I thinked we linked at the same instance..a little differently...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/09/ah-its-cool-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. Thanks sir...
      And I loved your 1st haiku :)

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  2. In childhood my pillow was a mute witness to my tears when mom scolded, fight with friends or low scores in exams.Your haiku reminded me of that.

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  3. a silent, tender bosom friend........

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  4. Reminds me of a song from Bee Gees album....lovely!

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    1. Is it?
      I think I should check the song then Vandana...

      Thank you :)

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