Tuesday 17 September 2013

Dreadful!


"Let’s break up", you said
And walked away from me
What a dreadful day!
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What a dreadful day!
Still follows like a shadow
And tears embrace me

18 comments:

  1. A day like that IS dreadful, no doubt about it.

    Dreading

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  2. It's really haunting..Satya...yet I have a view that if someone makes a choice without showing concern for the other person then he/she doesn't deserve even the respect of a memory.. life must move on with greater clarity...and one always meets nobler souls on the way...

    Well, perhaps my comments come as a mere thought triggered by the haiku..I appreciate that the gravity can be experienced only by the one who suffers.. You have brought out the feelings of the sufferer quite well... thanks..

    RS:)

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    1. Sir... I certainly agree with what you said...
      But to make peace with that and move on in life will be dreadful in the beginning...

      Thanks sir :)

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  3. Hauntingly beautiful emotions here...love them, Satya! Bravo...

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  4. Always this dread in a lovers tiff indeed!! How things can change in a snap!!

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  5. Satya you express emotions wonderfully. A very nice one, as usual.

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    1. Thanks a lot for your encouraging comments :)

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  6. I can feel the dread and see the image

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  7. The longing for that person expressed beautifully!

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