Tuesday, 24 September 2013

I Strive Hard...!


I strive very hard
So I don't drown in your eyes
As deep as ocean

But alas! I fail
Intoxicating it is
Addicted I am


22 comments:

  1. Very romantic and passionate....not a bad addiction..touch wood!!! A real nice haiku set...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/09/she-strives-real-hardhaiku.html

    RS

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    1. Thanks a lot sir...
      And yes... Touch wood! :)

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  2. first one is awesome....both nice......

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  3. Both are fabulous. I liked the words 'Intoxicating and addicted' in this context.

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  4. More beneficial than most addictions!

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  5. Sometimes our striving is not rewarded, that's for sure!

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  6. Love is an addiction. What a passionate haiku.

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  7. Somebody is very lucky! Beautiful expression!

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  8. I do like the first one, but the use of intoxicating is wonderful in the last..
    Peace
    Siggi

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  9. Drowning in ur eyes.....Exquisite!!!!!

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