Friday, 25 October 2013

Alcoholic!

 
He rummaged around
Messing the beautiful home
For alcohol drop

34 comments:

  1. A sad story :-( alcohol spoils life!!!

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    1. It does...
      But nobody realises that...
      Thanks Amrit :)

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  2. wonderfully captured that stigma of society in so few words...nicely done Satya....

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  3. Sad but true...good take on the prompt !
    Peace
    Siggi

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  4. I like the way you said it..well, luckily, have none in my family....but have heard stories...

    RS

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    1. Blessed you are sir...
      And thanks a lot :)

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  5. Satya, you have very aptly carved a scene of an alcoholic's madness.

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  6. I read somewhere, first you drink alcohol and then alcohol drinks you...
    Very good haiku indeed. :)

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    1. So true...
      I cant deny that...

      Thanks Shilpa :)

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  7. The deadly drop that drains out the world, nicely done Satya!!

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  8. So painful. Alcohol destroys homes and relationships. you have handled this subject in a sensitive manner.

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    1. It does...
      And some people give everything for that...
      I pity and loathe them...

      Thanks Kalpana :)

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  9. So sad. Captured alcoholism and the havoc it causes so well. ♥

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  10. Well written. Alcohol makes people go crazy!

    www.numerounity.com

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  11. Nice Haiku! Wooowoooo, Ku of http://haikubyku.com (Zoe's brofur)

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  12. Lovely. Yes an alcoholic can go to any length for a drop of the dreaded liquid.

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    1. They do... And isn't that crazy!?
      Thanks Geeta :)

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  13. A really creative take on the prompt. Good job!

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