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Tears were rolling down his cheeks. He thought twice before taking the blue colored hankie on which his mother had embroidered his initials, VK. This is called chain stitch, his mother’s voice echoed in his ears. Fresh tears rolled down his cheeks when he thought about her. He couldn’t crumple the hankie. He carefully tucked it back in his pockets and wiped his face with the sleeves of his shirt.
“Vaibhav, go with Raju chaha. He will take you to your room and
introduce to your friends”, the convent sister said. Her eyes contained
compassion. She kissed on his forehead and wiped the fresh set of tears. But he
wanted his mother to wipe those tears. However, he didn’t say that. He
dutifully followed Raju chacha who
was carrying his luggage, packed by his mother. Tears rolled down again and he
couldn’t stop that.
Raju chacha introduced him to his new friends. All of them were as old
as he was, seven years. They would be his classmates too. They all seemed to be
happy. Don’t they miss their mother, he wondered. Thought of his mother brought
more tears in his eyes.
“Don’t worry Vaibhav. You
will feel good soon. You better sleep for sometime”, said a boy who looked as
tall as he was. He had a perfect round face and jet black eyes. He was fairer
than he was and his name was Anirudh. Raju chacha
left after tweaking his cheeks and patting Anirudh.
Anirudh patiently sat beside
Vaibhav hoping that he would fall asleep soon. But he couldn’t. Memories of his
mother played in his mind like a movie.
Her long hair... big eyes...
her sweet voice... then her tears...
Those were the colors of his
mother... Always soothing...
Vaibhav was told that his
father was a rich man and he met his mother in college. They were classmates.
It was love at first site and eight years later, marriage followed.
Vaibhav was born on their
third year since marriage. There was only happiness until his father started
getting addicted to alcohol. Every night he would come home and they would
fight.
His mother tried to shield
Vaibhav from everything. She didn’t want him to witness the misery that she was
going through.
But on that day when his
father’s parents came to their house, he saw what she was going through. They
accused her and said that their son has become what he has because of her. They
forcefully took their son with them leaving him and his mother at home.
Then divorce followed. Vaibhav
used to find his mother crying all the times. Yet she poured him with love and
care.
One afternoon, they received
a phone call and their lives changed forever.
His father has driven the
car in a drunken state. He was hospitalized and was suffering from coma. The
news shattered Vaibhav’s father’s father and he died out of cardiac arrest. After
all, his father was their only child.
They went to the funeral and
his father’s mother pleaded her to take care of their son and herself. His
mother, being someone who can’t hate anyone, agreed.
Her life became miserable
since then. She would be at hospital beside his father. Then, take care of the
needs of her mother-in-law. She couldn’t spend enough time with Vaibhav.
On granny’s insistence, Vaibhav
was enrolled in a boarding school.
“Only for a year. As soon as
papa gets well, we all can live together. Isn’t Vaibhav a good boy?” she had
asked by suppressing the tears. Yet a droplet rolled down her cheeks.
As he lay in bed beside
Anirudh, he took the red color sari of his mother. He loved to see his mother
in that sari. She was his angel. She held it close to him and prayed that his
father gets well soon.
Then he felt Anirudh hugging
him tight with another hand caressing his hair and several faces smiling at
him. They looked as if they understand what he felt and what he had gone through;
as if they have already gone through what he was going through.
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Hi Satya, what a soul ful story!! There are tears in my eyes.So moving!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot madam...
DeleteI am so glad that you liked it!
I loved this story Satya. Particularly the climax is touching :) Keep writing for BAT.
ReplyDeleteSomeone is Special
Thanks a lot...
Deletethat tugged at my heart...so touching!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Princess :)
DeleteTouching....I can feel it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Simran :)
DeleteHi Satya
ReplyDeleteThe post is nice. You picked up the story of a child's separation from his mother vis-a-vis boarding school. Though slightly, but I felt it fell a bit out of line with the theme "Color". Nonetheless, I wish you great luck for BAT. Hope you are having a fun time by reading all the other entries.
Cheers
Animesh
What I tried to narrate is about a child's memories of his mother... From her smiles to cries... In a subtle manner and in an obvious manner....
DeleteBAT is a real fun... And yes! The posts are all a pleasure to read... One out-shining another...
Anyways... Thanks Animesh :)
Nice story Satya. Bereavement from loved ones always causes inexplicable pain. kudos to you for mirroring that so soulfully in your words :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Kirti :)
DeleteThe colour of motherhood was being replaced by the colour of a new friendship. Things could have been worse for Vaibhav otherwise, I guess.
ReplyDeleteAll the best for BAT 42
Here's my entry
CRD - HOLY WAR
Cheers
CRD
Thanks CRD :)
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