Saturday, 19 October 2013

Rainbows Adorned!!!

Ah! Until you came
My life was like a grey sky
No colors. Lifeless

As soon as you came
Rainbows adorned my blue sky
Then, happiness wrapped!

44 comments:

  1. This is beautiful...but if you could add more ,it will be more beautiful. Otherwise it has a wonderful flow.

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  2. What a wonderful story of love. Grey to rainbows. Good job.

    Stop by mine?
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/only-a-grey-smudge/

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  3. enjoyed this.. it was happy and uplifting....

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  4. lovely journey from grey to vibgyor

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  5. I love a sky adorned with rainbows!!!!

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  6. rainbow love - what a difference a day makes, eh?

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  7. how blessed to be wrapped in a rainbow!

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  8. A romantic Haiku written excellently.

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  9. Short, sweet and simple. A lovely ode to love.

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  10. Ah, Locomente, I do love your writings!

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    1. Thanks a lot for your gracious comments! :)

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  11. Very beautiful. Your heart was showing.

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  12. Sweet romantic haiku. From grey to rainbow. lovely.

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  13. 'Rainbows adorned my blue sky." Ah! This indeed is a romantic one.Loved it.

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  14. Thanks to the grey sky, rainbow looks even more beautiful :)

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  15. your haiku reads well, I think you've found a love, then your sky was blue ...

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  16. This is beautiful Satya.... I love the flow of it and the beautiful message. TY for stopping by. :-)
    Eliz

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  17. Beautiful. Romantic. Love it
    Eliz

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