Saturday, 19 October 2013

Rainbows Adorned!!!

Ah! Until you came
My life was like a grey sky
No colors. Lifeless

As soon as you came
Rainbows adorned my blue sky
Then, happiness wrapped!
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43 comments:

  1. Magical Mystical TeacherOctober 20, 2013 6:53 pm

    Who can argue with being wrapped in happiness? ;)

    Whirling Photo Album

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  2. Vandana SharmaOctober 20, 2013 7:26 pm

    This is beautiful...but if you could add more ,it will be more beautiful. Otherwise it has a wonderful flow.

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  3. AnonymousOctober 20, 2013 9:13 pm

    What a wonderful story of love. Grey to rainbows. Good job.

    Stop by mine?
    http://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2013/10/20/only-a-grey-smudge/

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  4. revelationsOctober 20, 2013 9:25 pm

    enjoyed this.. it was happy and uplifting....

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  5. Sumana RoyOctober 20, 2013 9:40 pm

    lovely journey from grey to vibgyor

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  6. Sherry Blue SkyOctober 20, 2013 11:25 pm

    I love a sky adorned with rainbows!!!!

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  7. ruthOctober 21, 2013 12:36 am

    rainbow love - what a difference a day makes, eh?

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  8. LauraOctober 21, 2013 3:53 am

    how blessed to be wrapped in a rainbow!

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  9. AnonymousOctober 21, 2013 7:07 am

    love it :-)

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  10. UnknownOctober 21, 2013 2:00 pm

    A romantic Haiku written excellently.

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  11. Divya KhannaOctober 21, 2013 4:47 pm

    Good one!!

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  12. AnonymousOctober 21, 2013 5:04 pm

    Sweet haiku. Both of them. :)

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  13. RachnaOctober 21, 2013 5:04 pm

    Short, sweet and simple. A lovely ode to love.

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  14. AnonymousOctober 21, 2013 6:51 pm

    Ah, Locomente, I do love your writings!

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    1. LocomenteOctober 21, 2013 10:23 pm

      Thanks a lot for your gracious comments! :)

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  15. gautami tripathyOctober 21, 2013 8:33 pm

    Lovely writing!

    balance it out

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  16. J COctober 21, 2013 9:51 pm

    Very beautiful. Your heart was showing.

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  17. kalpana solsiOctober 22, 2013 6:35 pm

    Sweet romantic haiku. From grey to rainbow. lovely.

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  18. UnknownOctober 22, 2013 6:54 pm

    'Rainbows adorned my blue sky." Ah! This indeed is a romantic one.Loved it.

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  19. ReshmaOctober 22, 2013 8:56 pm

    Thanks to the grey sky, rainbow looks even more beautiful :)

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  20. Angelika PoeOctober 23, 2013 1:48 am

    your haiku reads well, I think you've found a love, then your sky was blue ...

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  21. Eliz FrankOctober 29, 2013 5:38 am

    This is beautiful Satya.... I love the flow of it and the beautiful message. TY for stopping by. :-)
    Eliz

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  22. Eliz FrankOctober 31, 2013 9:40 pm

    Beautiful. Romantic. Love it
    Eliz

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