Thursday 23 January 2014

That Fateful Ride...


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nnette and Sameer’s love gave way to happy wedding. Their wedding ceremonies were carried out in both Christian’s and Punjabi’s style! Families nodded and happiness flooded.

Then they headed to a hill station for honeymoon. Sweet nothings were exchanged until they became one. Cuddles followed and love lingered in the air.

Until that evening when Sameer’s adventurous dominated. He compelled Annette to accompany him for a bike ride. They hired one and ventured adorning a mysterious smile.

Chill breeze put them romance ablaze and they felt lost in each other’s company.

That was when a transport bus hit on them and took Sameer away. The site of Sameer’s jammed head made Annette lose her sanity.

6 comments:

  1. Well...not at all what I expected. (Just a couple small things--Chill breeze put their romance" and"the sight of Sameer's", not the site.)

    Enjoy your weekend!

    janet

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    1. Thanks for the observations and comment... Its noted!

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  2. Dear Loco,

    A sad twist that began with a "happy every after." Poignant.

    Shalom,

    Rochelle

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    1. Thanks a lot Rochelle...
      For the prompt and the comment :)

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  3. Very sad end... really not what I expected.

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