Monday, 5 May 2014

Succumb to You

Yes, when our eyes met
Rings of love surrounded me; and
I succumbed to you!
Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – Ring



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25 comments:

  1. Sumana RoyMay 05, 2014 10:31 am

    love the romantic ring...lovely :)

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  2. UnknownMay 05, 2014 12:52 pm

    beautiful...how romantic! :)

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  3. Ramesh SoodMay 05, 2014 4:48 pm

    Yes, one gets what one hopes for here.. full of romance.. I have change a bit today.. have written based on what I saw at a store..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/a-distant-home-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. LocomenteMay 05, 2014 5:35 pm

      Lolz...
      Thanks sir...
      I am unable to think anything beyond romance... :(

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  4. AnonymousMay 05, 2014 6:18 pm

    how lovely!

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  5. UnknownMay 06, 2014 8:40 am

    A lovely Romance!

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  6. Amrit SinhaMay 06, 2014 12:42 pm

    your romantic haiku
    surpasses Yashraj films
    a pleasure to read

    :-)

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    1. LocomenteMay 06, 2014 2:30 pm

      Thanks Amrit...
      For being a constant motivator :)

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  7. AnonymousMay 06, 2014 6:31 pm

    Superb :-)

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  8. ReshmaMay 07, 2014 4:52 am

    I echo Amrit's thoughts...Your words take me to the mushy movie land Satya :)

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    1. LocomenteMay 07, 2014 10:58 am

      Lolz...
      Thanks.
      Unusually... I am feeling honored!

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  9. rabbi neil fleischmannMay 07, 2014 5:49 am

    Beautiful, I feel the sincere emotion!

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  10. UnknownMay 07, 2014 6:40 pm

    Pure romance, I love it! ♥

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  11. Judith WesterfieldMay 09, 2014 5:14 am

    Sultry!

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  12. AnonymousMay 09, 2014 10:27 pm

    sublime !

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  13. AnonymousMay 12, 2014 12:39 am

    Aaah! Magnetism, nothing like it.

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