Monday, 5 May 2014

Succumb to You

Yes, when our eyes met
Rings of love surrounded me; and
I succumbed to you!
Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – Ring



26 comments:

  1. love the romantic ring...lovely :)

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  2. Yes, one gets what one hopes for here.. full of romance.. I have change a bit today.. have written based on what I saw at a store..

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/05/a-distant-home-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. Lolz...
      Thanks sir...
      I am unable to think anything beyond romance... :(

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  3. your romantic haiku
    surpasses Yashraj films
    a pleasure to read

    :-)

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    1. Thanks Amrit...
      For being a constant motivator :)

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  4. I echo Amrit's thoughts...Your words take me to the mushy movie land Satya :)

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    1. Lolz...
      Thanks.
      Unusually... I am feeling honored!

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  5. Beautiful, I feel the sincere emotion!

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  6. Pure romance, I love it! ♥

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