Tuesday, 24 June 2014

Comfort!

I derive comfort
When I lie on your shoulders
And listen to you

PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt - Comfort

18 comments:

  1. This is quite nice, calming and comforting..

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  2. Very nicely written.
    Satya, I have nominated your name for the Liebster Award. Congratulations. For details kindly refer to my post dated 25th June 2014.

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    1. Thanks a lot madam...
      For the comments and the nomination :)

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  3. ah ! this is the real thing ,Satya ! wonderful !

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  4. This is lovely. It reminds me of comforting my children when they were really small. ♥

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    1. Aw... Thats sweet!!!
      Thanks a lot Kathy :)

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  5. I am thrilled to see the correct use of "lie" here. You have no idea how many people would have written "When I lay on your shoulders." Ugh! So congratulations!

    Looking for Comfort

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  6. so beautiful in its simplicity! :)

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  7. Putting your head on someone's shoulder...yes
    Lying on someone's shoulders...no
    He must be a strong robust athletic type
    and you must be very petite:)

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    1. Ha ha...
      Thats why they say "health is wealth"!!!!

      Thanks :)

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