Friday, 6 June 2014

Frankly blank… Yours, Crack!

I am
Blank… Blank… Blank…
Mind is fully black…
No thought; no worries
Peace dominates

I am
Frank… Frank… Frank
And I feel light-headed
I don’t miss you anymore
I don’t love you any-more

I am
Crack… Crack… Crack…
But I do think about you
When I wonder why am I not thinking about you!
Frankly blank… Yours, Crack!



16 comments:

  1. Someday the world will be dancing to your songs :-)

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    1. I am waiting for that day Amrit... :)

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  2. Freedom from a burden carried too long is freedom indeed. I hope that is the crack where the Light shines in.

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    1. Thats a nice way of looking at it Susan...
      Thanks :)

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  3. Sigh (eyes rolling) who is it this time?:)

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  4. This made me smile - as long as it is the crack where the light gets in:)

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    1. Thats a very positive way of looking at it...
      Thanks Sherry :)

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  5. sometimes things are over long before we realize... and we just wonder about our emotions... like susan i hope it is the crack where the light shines in...

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  6. Sometimes it feels good to have a blank mind, I think. And sometime, after a while, it is good to tell yourself not to think about someone IF the relationship is totally over.

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    1. Sometimes... Yes! It helps...
      Thanks Mary :)

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  7. I'm wondering why you're wondering why you're not thinking about that one you don't think about anymore.

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    1. Ha ha...
      Thats exactly what I am thinking too :)

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  8. Amrit's right. this poem of yours reminds me so much of Langston Hughes's stuff. It's danceable and with a story too. Love it!!!

    The Psalms of Jamztoma
    www.jamztoma.blogspot.com

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