Monday 11 August 2014

Abandoned Me...!

You shattered my dreams
Cut my heart into pieces
And abandoned me!


PS: Thanks Haiku Horizons for the prompt - Cut

20 comments:

  1. Very sorry. But nice haiku.

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  2. That is sad but a fantastic haiku!!!

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  3. When abandoned it is shattering and ripping the heart. isn't it?

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    1. Oh! It is..:(
      But life has to move on, thats the toughest part

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  4. Ooops ... that would be painful :-/

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  5. Hope its just for Haiku. Too severe

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    1. No worries...
      This is only for the Haiku...
      I pray that nobody experiences this pain!

      Thanks :)

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  6. ah ! the pain in your haiku ..! you are too good !

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