Monday, 15 September 2014

I remember you

In the train of thoughts
I travel down the timeline
I remember you
PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the Prompt – Train J

22 comments:

  1. Nice haiku. I am glad you remember.

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  2. Very nice take on the prompt. Good one !

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  3. This is Interesting...Satya.. I liked it... Don't know how I crafted it spontaneously but I hope you will like my story here:
    with 'her' presence as always...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/09/trained-syllables-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. Sir... Loved your haiku...
      Sounded like a continuation to mine!

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  4. emotional -true expressions nicely composed in poetic form

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  5. Beautiful memories are always cherished with happiness:)

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  6. Beautiful Haiku. We all remember someone.

    Melanie
    bd

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