Monday, 15 September 2014

I remember you

In the train of thoughts
I travel down the timeline
I remember you
PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the Prompt – Train J

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18 comments:

  1. SGSeptember 15, 2014 12:17 pm

    Nice haiku. I am glad you remember.

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  2. rallentandaSeptember 15, 2014 12:37 pm

    Very nice take on the prompt. Good one !

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  3. Amrit SinhaSeptember 15, 2014 12:54 pm

    Thanks for remembering :p

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  4. Ramesh SoodSeptember 15, 2014 1:09 pm

    This is Interesting...Satya.. I liked it... Don't know how I crafted it spontaneously but I hope you will like my story here:
    with 'her' presence as always...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2014/09/trained-syllables-haiku.html

    RS

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 15, 2014 3:25 pm

      Sir... Loved your haiku...
      Sounded like a continuation to mine!

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  5. Anjum Wasim DarSeptember 15, 2014 2:59 pm

    emotional -true expressions nicely composed in poetic form

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  6. NoopurSeptember 15, 2014 3:55 pm

    quite emotional.....

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  7. Vandana SharmaSeptember 15, 2014 5:12 pm

    Beautiful memories are always cherished with happiness:)

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  8. UnknownSeptember 17, 2014 1:34 am

    Beautiful Haiku. We all remember someone.

    Melanie
    bd

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  9. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2014 10:05 am

    so sweet :)

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  10. Bastet's Waka LibrarySeptember 18, 2014 1:36 pm

    So sweetly said ... love it!

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  11. Ankita September 20, 2014 11:20 am

    lovely Haiku :)

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