Saturday, 20 September 2014

What Happens to me...

Ah! I just don’t know…
Thinking... what happens to me
When I am with you.

I forget the world…
Time and yes, even myself
When I am with you.

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50 comments:

  1. SGSeptember 20, 2014 8:52 am

    Good one. Have you heard of a Johnny Mathis song "When I am with you"?

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 22, 2014 12:35 pm

      No, I have not.
      I think I should read the lyrics :P
      Thanks SG:)

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  2. rudraprayagaSeptember 20, 2014 8:07 pm

    Nice very nice,but don't forget yourself.

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  3. Pooja MahimkarSeptember 21, 2014 9:54 am

    oh that feeling!!! you made me miss him right now :D

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  4. anilkurup59September 21, 2014 10:56 am

    What happens?
    Bowled over

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  5. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2014 12:49 pm

    Sending this link to my Love right now!!! Deep, all-encompassing love.

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  6. NatašekSeptember 21, 2014 1:18 pm

    a great feeling indeed...

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  7. Vandana SharmaSeptember 21, 2014 1:46 pm

    Lovely feeling of love!!

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  8. SanchoSeptember 21, 2014 1:46 pm

    Oh dear! (What else can i say?)

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  9. J Cosmo NewberySeptember 21, 2014 1:51 pm

    It's alright as long as my wife doesn't find out.

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  10. alan1704September 21, 2014 3:13 pm

    Lovely really well captured from the heart

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  11. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2014 3:32 pm

    Very excellent, you pack a lot of meaning into very few words.

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  12. Old EggSeptember 21, 2014 5:07 pm

    There is nothing quite like being a part of someone you love.

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  13. MarySeptember 21, 2014 5:33 pm

    When you forget yourself when you are with someone, that is a very good sign! Smiles.

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  14. SusanSeptember 21, 2014 5:38 pm

    Scary little poem ... love how the voice starts from such forgetfulness. Beware. There is something here to live for, something to resist.

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  15. Sumana RoySeptember 21, 2014 5:51 pm

    sweet :)

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  16. GabriellaSeptember 21, 2014 6:36 pm

    It is a very special relationship you describe. One to cherish and preserve.

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  17. ZQSeptember 21, 2014 7:01 pm

    Sounds like love :-) well expressed!
    ZQ

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  18. AnonymousSeptember 21, 2014 9:45 pm

    To be so enamored with someone that you lose the constant sense of time and its pressures....that is a beautiful reprieve from life's tyranny of time.

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  19. brudbergSeptember 22, 2014 12:05 am

    Such a person is the most precious to be with, but also the most dangerous.

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  20. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 22, 2014 12:40 am

    I remember those feelings. "with rue my heart is laden...." Smiles.

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  21. Stacy M.S.September 22, 2014 1:10 am

    this is a really sweet poem. sounds a lot like true love....or true infatuation!

    stacy lynn mar
    http://warningthestars.blogspot.com/

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  22. scotthastiepoetSeptember 22, 2014 2:37 am

    Lovely and simple and true - great capture... With Best Wishes Scott

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  23. Gen Giggles September 22, 2014 4:37 am

    It must be new.

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    1. LocomenteSeptember 22, 2014 2:20 pm

      Could be seasoned too...
      You never know...
      Because love might happen again and again :)

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  24. seasideauthor (Sharon Rose Thomas.)September 22, 2014 4:56 am

    Everyone has times like this. Wishing those feelings would pass someday.

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  25. UnknownSeptember 22, 2014 10:39 am

    Too good........Full of love..........

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  26. Lonely soulOctober 27, 2014 3:48 pm

    When ua so crazy for some one this actually happens!!!
    Even I have xperienced dz kind of awww feeling..lol...;-)

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