A most interesting and intriguing post. Thanks.Greetings from London.
Thanks a lot :)
After referring to dictionary,I could get a faint understanding of the Haikus written with imagination..
Thanks sir... I tried to mean this:"It was a clandestine affair. They planned something. As they planned, they were able to envision how it would be (Phantasmagoria). Later, the plan was executed. What remained was the memories which trailed in their minds (Phantasmagoria again)"I hope that I was able to convey this thought...
Very interesting haiku.
Thanks SG :)
i like how you kept the mid line the same...and the first lines near the same, but evoked quite different feelings....
a touch of scandal! :)
Thanks Brian :)
@ a good atheist : Clandestine affairs are always scandalous.
Hmm, rhyming, but trifle difficult to get to the root of what you intend to convey
I wanted to convey this:"It was a clandestine affair. They planned something. As they planned, they were able to envision how it would be (Phantasmagoria). Later, the plan was executed. What remained was the memories which trailed in their minds (Phantasmagoria again)"I hope I did justice.Thanks Anil :)
Hello greetings.I had to refer to the dictionary to understand the meaning of Phantasmagoria . A jaw breaker indeed.Clandestine affairs always end in Phantasmagoria and cherished long after the Clandestine affair is done.Best wishes
You got it right sir...!Thanks :)
Thanks for the new word - "Phantasmagoria" :-p
It's my favorite word Amrit :)
very nice use of unusual words
Thanks Vandana :)
I agree with Vandana.. :)
Thanks Sumana :)
Thank you :)
Planning our lives and activities does produce great results (although impromptu can be fun!).
Impromptu is always fun...Thanks Oldegg :)
Gorgeous flowing "phantastic" :)
Thanks PKP :)
There certainly is a time for phantasmagoria in one's life. Smiles.
Thanks Mary :)
Must say this was quite interesting. I think it puts the clandestine in perspective.
Thanks Bjorn :)
I used the dictionary! And somewhat understood what you are trying to write :-(
Thanks Rupasi :)
And it all comes down to having those cherished memories. :)Beautiful!
Thanks Saru :)
I like the reverse format of this, it works!
Thanks Sherry :)
Very intriguing, pun intended.
Thanks Meisner :)
It has always been and it will always be about the memories:)
Yes... ONLY memories!
I always appreciate posts with less-commonly used words. Phantasmagoria is a definite winner of a word :-)
Thanks...And thats my favorite word!
word play at its imaginative best
Thanks Deeps :)
Your haiku relate nicely to each other - two concepts bouncing off each other like molecules
Thanks Moonie. Your observation made me happy!
Great clever use of the haiku form! I fund the perspective interesting.
Thanks Gabriella :)