Sunday, 23 November 2014

Unchanged

From dawn to dusk, I think about you.
At night, I dream about you.
I look around and I see you.
I close my eyes and I feel you.
My heartbeats chant your name;
And my thoughts always reach you.
No matter what you feel
Regardless of what others say,
My love remains unchanged
And it will remain so
Forever and ever!

62 comments:

  1. Satya - you must be a true romantic at heart to pen such deep and thoughtful lines. Who ever is the receiver of such unrequited love - God bless them!

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    1. Sorry I typed in unrequited instead of unrestrained.

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    2. Thinking aloud - The poem can also mean u requited love... Because it could also mean that the love will remain regardless of reciprocation... That was the perspective I gained from your earlier comment... "Unrestrained" makes me to look at poem differently...

      Thanks for the thoughts :)

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  2. A beautiful poem.There was a fleeting thought when I saw the word 'chant' whether the poem could have a spiritual connotation.
    Think about it,the poem fits admirably to the idea.

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    1. After reading your comments, I reread my poem... I realised that it simply talks about love... so could fit into any form of it in its purest form...

      Thanks for the perspective sir :)

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  3. "My heartbeats chant your name."...the line reminds me of devotional songs...beautifully done Satya :)

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  4. Until Mrs N finds out and then all hell will break out.

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  5. "My heartbeats chant your name" ah yes, I know this feeling!

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  6. "And my thoughts always reach you." Oh to know that! This line makes the entire poem unique, calm, self-assured, so I believe that the love itself will not change whatever changes life brings.

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  7. don't think much of what others will say... as you long as you know the beatings of heart.. then so be it. the poem has a spiritual undertone too. perfect for this sunday read.

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  8. Sometimes a person just knows a love will last forever. This is what your poem expressed to me!

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  9. It is not always easy to write about love as so many poets have done so before us. You did very well. "My heartbeats chant your name" - I too really like this line.

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  10. I especially like "my thoughts always reach you." That is a deep connection.

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  11. Satya what a classical expression of love, really enjoyed this determined passion

    have a nice Sunday

    much love...

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    1. Thanks a lot Gillena...
      Have a great week ahead :)

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  12. What a beautiful outburst of emotions ! Absolutely romantic...

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  13. This could be good after all to keep loving after loss, or very bad, because your mind is what you lost.

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    1. That's a very scary perspective... If that has really happened, then, its really sad...
      Thanks sir :)

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  14. A hymn to constancy - I can relate to that and the rewards are deep... With Best wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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  15. My heartbeats chant your name.....what a beautiful melody to the lucky recipient of that romantic phrase!

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  16. Sizeless unconditional love....Great for your soul! x

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  17. a very suitable title you've given your poem here. I think you quite a romantic person Locomente. keep us posted on your romance. Very admirable.

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    1. I think I am learning to romance words...
      A magnificent way to reach anyone's heart and connect to their soul...

      Thanks for your encouraging comments James :)

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  18. Who would not wish for a friend, partner or lover that was not constant and true.

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  19. A great heartfelt poem and so realistic! ;) <3

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  20. When it comes to love posts, you are the best :-)

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    1. Coming from you... I am honored !!!

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  21. Simple and heart-felt. Beautifully penned. :)

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  22. Pure & beautiful...
    Jz loved it...!!!

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  23. Fantastic love poem. It is what I feel for my wife and I'm glad that you get to experience such a strong bond as well.

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    1. Thanks a lot..
      but this is just an imagination...

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  24. At times glorious and others painful.
    Romantic feelings abound...

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  25. A truly beautiful poem....'My heartbeats chant your name'....my favorite line

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