Thursday, 11 December 2014

Die in Sleep

I have only one wish
To die in sleep
When I am still dreaming about you.



28 comments:

  1. A little depressing but well said and filed with emotion.

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  2. Why such a melancholic wish when happily dreaming about someone?
    Nevertheless it is a moving verse.

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    1. I think it is my desire to die peacefully which is reflected here...
      Thanks GP.

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  3. Dying in sleep is a wish that many harbour...
    Painless & deep sleep to wake up never...
    Nice words

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  4. that would certainly be a nice dream...smiles.

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  5. Intense.

    But, just for argument sake - waking up with their thoughts/memories would make anyone more happy, will it not ?

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    1. That would be awesome too!
      Thanks Ajay :)

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  6. I kind of agree with Ajay on this one... I mean how about dreaming it again and again rather than dying in the dream... And mayb u wud get to live that dream too... So no dying :-P

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    1. By dying I didnt mean dying now; right away.
      I meant when I die I must be dreaming about you...
      A long term wish...

      Thanks Rupasi :)

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    2. Ohhh Okkk :-D
      that wud indeed be much better :-)

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  7. :) Written hundreds of poems by now (if not, pls :) ) ,
    which is your best, heartfelt poem, you believe it to be the best of your works.. ?

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