Sunday 14 December 2014

Drifting away from you

Yes, I am leaving
Sometimes love is not enough
It needs so much more!

46 comments:

  1. Good luck! Quite right, too. :-)

    Greetings from London.

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  2. Beautiful haiku. Whoever let's you leave is the most unlucky person.

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  3. Yeah, it's quite true...

    Love alone is not enough!!

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  4. straight forward said....................!!!!

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  5. Sometimes it simply doesn't work out..

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  6. Love is far more complicated that love alone!

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  7. There's a mighty sadness in this mighty brief poem!

    A Tiny Whirlwind

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  8. hits you right in the heart center...perfect!

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  9. honesty is very much needed in a relationship...
    you've been very honest with this haiku :-)

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  10. Interesting thought... but no matter how hard I try I can't find anything/any reason other then selfishness, to abandon Love... unless of course there wasn't any "love".
    Your Haiku served its purpose and was thought provoking. Thanks.
    ZQ

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    1. Selfishness is a big enough reason to abandon love...
      Thanks a lot :)

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  11. Love has many facets....but it is also a two-way street. If it is one-sided, it can be painful... Always nice to see you,Locomente!

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  12. You are right, Locomente. I'd say love is a prerequisite on which two individuals will build but it is definitely not enough by itself.

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  13. You have said so much in a few lines. Yes, it takes more than love.

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  14. sometimes that is the right thing to do

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  15. Best Wishes Satyr

    have a joyous Sunday

    much love...

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  16. Reciprocation is always a good thing. Combine that with trust, then it might work.

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  17. Understanding, empathy is different from just love,aren't they?

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    1. They very much are... But, they are important if love has to last.
      Thanks Anil :)

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  18. Empty stomach won't go after love. Meaningful haiku.

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    1. Well said...
      Thanks for the perspective Rudra :)

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  19. "Love" is not just simple hearts its much much more than that!!!

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  20. Leave if you must, but if the love is true, you'll be back for more :)
    Nice one :)

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  21. Depends what you consider under LOVE....the souls have to be willing to work at 'togetherness' stuff.

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