Sunday, 7 December 2014

Wonderland

Walking hand in hand
Molding the steps in wet sand
Ah! In wonderland


44 comments:

  1. that is really nice!! I loved the second line the most :)

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  2. walking on an island wonderland...said this while singing winter wonderland's tune. i said island cause you mentioned sand instead of snow. nice poem!!!

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  3. And filling the heart with love and delight!

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  4. Magic in three lines and it lends itself to different interpretations!!

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  5. anywhere will be a wonderland if you are with someone walking hand in hand :-)
    lovely write

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  6. I too was enveloped in a wonderful image of my feet in the sand and being in wonderland....

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  7. nice to meet steps of life together with someone close to you... x

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  8. Oh, I just love molding footprints in wet sand....I've done this already and then looked back and taken a photo. A cool reminder of the path one walked! (literally and figuratively)

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  9. I too love the second line and how it can be read on different levels! Wishing you many more such beach walks.

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  10. A wonderland.. at this time of year I just wish for warm socks...

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  11. Reminds me of the sandy beach and the time I had in Varkala!

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    1. Varkala beach is awesome...
      Thanks Red :)

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  12. Beying able to create together is wonderland indeed.

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  13. Wonderland indeed. What could be better than to leave imprints in the sand with your loved one.

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  14. This is a lovely description of one of life's greatest pleasures :-)

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  15. then enjoy every moment of it

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  16. wonderful wonderland ;) very nice

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  17. there is a lovely freedom in this haiku, the walking, the imprinting, the exhilaration of breathing in the salty air

    have a nice week

    much love...

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