Monday, 23 February 2015

Older & Wiser?!!

With loved ones around
Fun and happiness surround
I am astound!

I am astound!
I am a year older.
If not wiser!

PS: Thanks to Haiku Horizons for the prompt – BirthdayJ


20 comments:

  1. Haha, I think the last line is a tipping point for everyone, I have written a similar haiku. :D

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  2. You are not a year older. You are just a year better.

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  3. Hmm the problem with human beings is that wisdom does not go hand in hand with age. Whilst wine matures with age.

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  4. I'm still waiter for wiser while the years pile on. ;-) Funny set of haiku.


    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/02/24/then-you-appeared/

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  5. Wonderful Haikus! It reveals that you are wise :) There is a saying in Kannada that means knowledgeable people won't express that they are knowledgeable :)

    TC! Keep smiling :)

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    1. Haha... It reveals that I wish I was wiser!

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  6. Love when loved ones gather to celebrate birthdays! Nice haiku!

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  7. It's always a kind of celebration when loved ones are around. :)

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