Sunday, 15 March 2015

Inspiration

In your memories…
Nights become elongated;
Sunshine becomes solace.
Priceless memories they are!
Ignites unforgotten love – always.
Rose-like charm they have
Adorned with beauty and thorns.
Tears roll down my cheeks, sometimes
I wipe them off and write about you.
On and on. Over and over.
Nestled in your memories, I live. Breathe.

59 comments:

  1. Superb

    Awesome

    Talented

    Yare

    Artistic

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    1. @SG:Thats quite an actrostic - very artistic... Thanks a lot!!!!

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  2. This so beautiful ... I am crying ... well, I'm always crying ... but ... ya ... thank you ... smiles :)

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  3. That is such a nice acrostic! Loved it :)

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  4. Lovely! I have enjoyed reading your acrostics with lines fitting together to your chosen word, inspiration. Thanks for the poem.

    - ksm

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  5. Even when all is lost, memories remain to sustain us.

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    1. They always do... Like the oxygen that keeps us alive!

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  6. Even lost love can be found in the depths of one's heart, the passion in its pounding voice, inspiring one to breathe more easily.

    An intriguing acrostic of amour!

    Poppy

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  7. How refreshing and lovely. Delightful poem and loved the form today.

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  8. Lovely poem; and I enjoyed its finale at the end: "Nestled in your memories I live: Breathe."

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  9. memories... a nice thing, but living so much better... moving on

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  10. An inspiration to inspire...............love!!

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  11. This quite an achievement - beautifully lyrical, despite the strictures of acrosticness!! With Best Wishes Scott www.scotthastie.com

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    1. Thanks a lot Scott...
      I am very glad that you liked it

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  12. Acrostics can sometimes feel a little forced.. this is just lovely though

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  13. Oh, so poignant! And the closing lines just hit the heart. "Nestled in your memories, I live. Breathe." Beautiful.

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  14. Oh what soulful emotions and memories here....beautifully presented.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  15. I liked its simplicity. it speaks a lot too. Ah even a whisper can be heard loudly when you are in love

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    1. Thanks a lot...
      I am so happy that you liked it

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  16. I like this so much. The words flow so easily and I love the last line.

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    1. Thanks Mynra...
      I am glad that you liked it :)

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  17. The acrostic is such an inspiration. It takes a lot of thinking to create one! So touching Locomente!

    Hank

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    1. Thanks for the motivating words Hank :)

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  18. Hope you will be making visits this week....thanks.

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    1. I have visited... Apologies for being so irregular...
      But thanks for your support, love and understanding...!

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  19. Its so true!!! Happens with me all the time!
    I loved it :)
    These tears have their own magic!

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  20. Oh! It is superb! And the compliment you received by SG too, it is apt for you :)

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  21. Really, really like that closing line,

    Elizabeth

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