Sunday, 8 March 2015

My Heart...

M
y heart melts for you
When I hear your voice.

M
y heart obliges to you
When you ask me to stay

M
y heart surrenders to you
When you pour unconditional love

M
y heart, crazy-crazy heart
Does all this and beyond because it loves you!

52 comments:

  1. Oh ya ... this is true ...no doubt ... smiles ... Love, cat.

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  2. His reply.

    My heart longs for you, my soul die's for you, my eyes cry for you, my empty arms reach out for you.

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  3. Ah, romance! (Smile.) Nice use of repetition.

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  4. How important emotions are to both fulfill ourselves and those we love.

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  5. Poor heart...waiting waiting...i hope it is fulfilled...in time ;)

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  6. There is something special and magical with M...

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  7. Ah, your poem shows the wonder of love. I like your form too.

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  8. a submissive heart.
    pure love

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  9. Mmmmmm!!!Unconditional Mmmmm :)

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  10. Sounds like a beautiful love! The heart indeed follows its own heart.

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  11. I love the progression, of the poem across the page, and of love across the landscape of the heart.

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  12. nice... there's not so much unconditional love out there any more... and i def. think our heart responds to it with all that we are...

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  13. My that heart is full of many signs of love. A nice presentation of the poem.

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  14. A beautiful love poem....so important that unconditional love.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  15. Wow! Beautiful lines and I like the step-like flow of emphasising MMMM :)

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