Sunday, 17 May 2015

Wings and Feather

Like a feather;
I had fallen on the ground.
I thought my life has ended.

Then, I realized;
I still have wings.
I flew high and reach the skies.

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54 comments:

  1. Destination InfinityMay 17, 2015 7:39 am

    Ground and sky are the same thing in two different forms!

    Destination Infinity

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  2. SGMay 17, 2015 10:21 am

    Sky is the limit. Fly high.

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  3. rudraprayagaMay 17, 2015 11:11 am

    May you fly to heights.Sky is not the limit.Beyond beyond stars and planets are there.Nice thoughts.

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  4. AathiraMay 17, 2015 12:31 pm

    Never give up. Power packed in few words!

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  5. Old EggMay 17, 2015 4:07 pm

    What a great metaphor where a small loss is not the end for there is so much more you can do with your life.

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  6. Sanaa RizviMay 17, 2015 4:19 pm

    This is such a powerful piece..!
    Well penned :)

    Lots of love
    Sanaa

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  7. brudbergMay 17, 2015 4:49 pm

    Those wings are what we need.. Hope you raise to the occasion.

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  8. MaryMay 17, 2015 4:54 pm

    Thank goodness for the wings which help us to rise when we thought it was no longer possible!

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  9. Jae RoseMay 17, 2015 5:35 pm

    Often it's not how things are..but how they are seen and what they could be...and yes fly high and free :)

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  10. BlogorattiMay 17, 2015 5:57 pm

    Really inspiring stuff!

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  11. Vandana SharmaMay 17, 2015 6:40 pm

    This hopes is required by everyone to chase their dreams.

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  12. totomaiMay 17, 2015 6:58 pm

    aim high. no, aim higher. :)

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  13. Amrit SinhaMay 17, 2015 7:13 pm

    Very inspiring ... we may fall down, but we should always get up and try to rise again :-)

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  14. Saru SinghalMay 17, 2015 8:09 pm

    This is so inspiring. When we fall, we lose perspective, but that's not how life goes on. Simple, beautiful and profound.

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  15. Sherry Blue SkyMay 17, 2015 9:24 pm

    I love the remembrance that one has wings, and that we get up off the ground and fly. Such is the journey!

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  16. gautami tripathyMay 17, 2015 9:43 pm

    Love this..

    where the night is without wind

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  17. Gillena CoxMay 17, 2015 10:00 pm

    Today we Catholics celebrate Ascension Sunday, this poem resonates well with my Catholic ethic; have a nice Sunday

    much love...

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    1. LocomenteMay 18, 2015 12:47 pm

      I am so glad to know that.
      Thanks Gillena :)

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  18. SandhyaMay 17, 2015 10:17 pm

    Once you notice the wings, there is no stopping! Interesting words!

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  19. SusanMay 17, 2015 10:19 pm

    I often fall with the feather and have to rediscover the wings. I totally love this!

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  20. DonnaMay 18, 2015 3:14 am

    Isn't it wonderful to discover we have wings!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  21. padmajaMay 18, 2015 4:12 am

    Beautiful! Even if we didn't fly high, at least we should never forget we have the wings !

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  22. Rosemary Nissen-WadeMay 18, 2015 8:17 am

    Bravo!

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  23. Sumana RoyMay 18, 2015 9:28 am

    love the spirit of it...

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  24. Gen Giggles May 18, 2015 6:28 pm

    The moment of transformation brings confusion and then we fly.

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  25. ZQMay 18, 2015 11:41 pm

    Short, flighty, and sweet!
    ZQ

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  26. humbirdMay 19, 2015 9:45 pm

    Short poem, and full of optimism! Thank you!

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  27. Boisterous BeeMay 19, 2015 11:26 pm

    That's the idea of life is..

    Cheers

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  28. J.N.T.May 20, 2015 12:00 am

    What a good ending! I loved it for its message! a simple poem with a thousand lessons. smiles.

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