Friday, 26 June 2015

In My Reveries!

Droplets of rain
Caress my heart

The smell of first rain
Soothes my mind

My flip-flop gets wet
And drenches my soul

My umbrella shields me from rain
Yet I dance in the rain – in my reveries!

PS: This poem is shared with Poets United

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    1. Yeah... And I love it more cz it rains only in the evenings :D

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  2. It has been awhile since I last visited locomente - nice words to return to... :D

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  3. Lovely words! We, Chennai people cherish rain! It is raining today after a long time, so feel so happy!

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  4. There is nothing quite like that scent of rain to lift your spirits!

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  5. Thanks, I needed this burst of joy right now. :-)

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  6. In every life a little rain must fall. Dance in it!

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  7. dancing in the rain is the right thing to do :-)

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  8. Dreaming, rain and dancing...can't think of anything better :)

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  9. How I long to frolic in the rain! Gorgeous poem :D

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  10. Happiness can make one go overboard to enjoy best way we desire! The rain can be helpful to enhance the great feelings. Wonderful lines Locomente!

    Hank

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  11. I feel a relief and lightness of the rain.. Wonderful

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  12. There is something refreshing and cleansing about rain!

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  13. You've captured well that joy that can come with the many senses engaged in a downpour of rain!

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  14. aha, i am in complete simpatico with your 'first rains' poem; it has been a hot dry spell and the rains are just now seeping in here in Trinidad and Tobago; have a nice Sunday

    much love...

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    1. May the droplets of rain soon touch your heart...
      Thanks Gillena :)

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  15. summer rain can be refreshing.. nicely caught.

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  16. This time of year, we prepare for our desert monsoon. Rain is so cleansing. Loved your poem!

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    1. Thanks Myrna:)
      I hope you have a great monsson :)

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  17. I love the flip flop getting wet and drenching your soul. Cool flight!

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    1. I am so happy that you liked it...'Thanks Sherry :)

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  18. I am smelling the rain right now...it seems we are both thinking about similar thoughts in our poems! :)

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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    1. Cheers then.. Great minds think alike :D

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  19. Rain is really fun, and relaxing too :) I love the poem, S.

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  20. Rain creates a very wonderful playground.

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    1. Ah! That joy of playing in the rain.. Wow!

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  21. Aww.. this one's so cute and nice

    Cheers

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