Friday, 26 June 2015

In My Reveries!

Droplets of rain
Caress my heart

The smell of first rain
Soothes my mind

My flip-flop gets wet
And drenches my soul

My umbrella shields me from rain
Yet I dance in the rain – in my reveries!

PS: This poem is shared with Poets United

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57 comments:

  1. CookieCrumbsInc.June 26, 2015 3:14 pm

    Bangalore rains are here!!! :D

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    1. LocomenteJune 26, 2015 3:54 pm

      Yeah... And I love it more cz it rains only in the evenings :D

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  2. rudraprayagaJune 26, 2015 5:36 pm

    Lovely thoughts.

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  3. SGJune 26, 2015 9:34 pm

    Very nice poem.

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  4. masodoJune 26, 2015 11:34 pm

    It has been awhile since I last visited locomente - nice words to return to... :D

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  5. SandhyaJune 27, 2015 6:32 pm

    Lovely words! We, Chennai people cherish rain! It is raining today after a long time, so feel so happy!

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  6. Old EggJune 28, 2015 1:14 pm

    There is nothing quite like that scent of rain to lift your spirits!

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  7. Rosemary Nissen-WadeJune 28, 2015 2:14 pm

    Thanks, I needed this burst of joy right now. :-)

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  8. Sumana RoyJune 28, 2015 2:41 pm

    sweetly joyful :)

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  9. J Cosmo NewberyJune 28, 2015 3:02 pm

    In every life a little rain must fall. Dance in it!

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  10. totomaiJune 28, 2015 3:16 pm

    dancing in the rain is the right thing to do :-)

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  11. Jae RoseJune 28, 2015 3:39 pm

    Dreaming, rain and dancing...can't think of anything better :)

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  12. Sanaa RizviJune 28, 2015 3:59 pm

    How I long to frolic in the rain! Gorgeous poem :D

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  13. kaykualaJune 28, 2015 4:10 pm

    Happiness can make one go overboard to enjoy best way we desire! The rain can be helpful to enhance the great feelings. Wonderful lines Locomente!

    Hank

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  14. UnknownJune 28, 2015 4:48 pm

    Nice atmosphere created..

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  15. brudbergJune 28, 2015 5:33 pm

    I feel a relief and lightness of the rain.. Wonderful

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  16. MaryJune 28, 2015 5:37 pm

    There is something refreshing and cleansing about rain!

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  17. C.C.June 28, 2015 7:08 pm

    You've captured well that joy that can come with the many senses engaged in a downpour of rain!

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  18. Gillena CoxJune 28, 2015 7:10 pm

    aha, i am in complete simpatico with your 'first rains' poem; it has been a hot dry spell and the rains are just now seeping in here in Trinidad and Tobago; have a nice Sunday

    much love...

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    1. LocomenteJuly 02, 2015 5:42 pm

      May the droplets of rain soon touch your heart...
      Thanks Gillena :)

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  19. NatašekJune 28, 2015 8:14 pm

    summer rain can be refreshing.. nicely caught.

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  20. Myrna R.June 28, 2015 9:48 pm

    This time of year, we prepare for our desert monsoon. Rain is so cleansing. Loved your poem!

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    1. LocomenteJuly 02, 2015 5:44 pm

      Thanks Myrna:)
      I hope you have a great monsson :)

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  21. ZQJune 29, 2015 12:49 am

    You go girl! :-)
    ZQ

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  22. Sherry Blue SkyJune 29, 2015 1:17 am

    I love the flip flop getting wet and drenching your soul. Cool flight!

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    1. LocomenteJuly 02, 2015 5:44 pm

      I am so happy that you liked it...'Thanks Sherry :)

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  23. DonnaJune 29, 2015 4:50 am

    I am smelling the rain right now...it seems we are both thinking about similar thoughts in our poems! :)

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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    1. LocomenteJuly 02, 2015 5:43 pm

      Cheers then.. Great minds think alike :D

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  24. Vinay Leo R.June 29, 2015 5:00 pm

    Rain is really fun, and relaxing too :) I love the poem, S.

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  25. Gen Giggles June 29, 2015 6:18 pm

    Rain creates a very wonderful playground.

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    1. LocomenteJuly 02, 2015 5:43 pm

      Ah! That joy of playing in the rain.. Wow!

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  26. Boisterous BeeJune 29, 2015 7:25 pm

    Aww.. this one's so cute and nice

    Cheers

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  27. RatJune 30, 2015 1:10 pm

    dreamy..drizzling words.. :)
    A Rat's Nibble : For You Know Me Better Than Myself

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  28. Magical Mystical TeacherJune 30, 2015 6:16 pm

    Dance on!

    No Idea (Longer Poem)

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