Saturday, 22 August 2015

Heartbreak

Heartbreak makes me write
Evaluating the past
Analyzing the fairness of reality
Relishing the Good old moments
Teary eyed I am
Breathings are uneven
Roasting me with guilt
Engulfing me with regret
Astounded I feel at the twist of fate
Kind be the destiny, I pray!!!

40 comments:

  1. Have never tried an acrostic... very interesting.

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    1. Thanks a lot...
      Glad that you liked it :)

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  2. This is so touching.. well expressed :)

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  3. Destiny is rather tricky often foiling our plans.

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  4. Writing is a good way of working through heartbreak!

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  5. Writing can be like exorcising the demons. And you dont even have to share it. Write it, and ball it up and throw it against the wall, or in the trash. Rage on until the poison is out of your heart.

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    1. Very well said. Writing is a therapy :)

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  6. Powerful emotions captured and displayed here !

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  7. this acroustic is simple in its telling and requesting. Heartbreak is not a nice place to be. Your last line is absolutely refreshing

    much love...

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  8. Alas.. the heartbreak is never painless.. good idea with an acrostic

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  9. In the end, it is going to be all right. You will realize that these heart breaks were to make you evolve into a more stronger being than you ever were.
    Cheer up :)

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    1. Thats true... Hopefully :)
      Thanks :)

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  10. The words have magic and wisdom of themselves! Heal and empower! Important choice of acrostic form!

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      Glad that you liked it :)

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  11. "Heartbreak makes me write"---ah, yes, there is hardly a better muse, is there?

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  12. It is a hard place to be, heartbreak. But life does get better.

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  13. Oh I love great acrostics and this is definitely one with a fabulous opening line!

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  14. Saddening.. but time always brings answers and new people.

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  15. Every line is beautiful! This is the first time I am reading 'acrostic' type of poetry! I didn't know about this!

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    1. Thanks a lot Sandhya...
      I am glad that you liked it :)

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  16. Yet we all go through it in someway. Great poem.

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  17. Fact but hard to accept as reality !

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  18. Acrostics are great forms. Strong feelings often make us be better poets. This is sad when the emotions are due to hardships.

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    1. Thanks a lot Gabriella... Sometimes certain words themselves evoke strong feelings - like this one!

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