Heartbreak
makes me write
Evaluating
the past
Analyzing
the fairness of reality
Relishing
the Good old moments
Teary
eyed I am
Breathings
are uneven
Roasting
me with guilt
Engulfing
me with regret
Astounded
I feel at the twist of fate
Kind
be the destiny, I pray!!!
love this acrostic...
ReplyDeleteThanks Sumana :)
DeleteOne can only hope...
ReplyDeleteHope... Yes!
DeleteHave never tried an acrostic... very interesting.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot...
DeleteGlad that you liked it :)
This is so touching.. well expressed :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Sanaa :)
DeleteDestiny is rather tricky often foiling our plans.
ReplyDeleteIt is... :(
DeleteWriting is a good way of working through heartbreak!
ReplyDeleteBest therapy.. Yes :)
DeleteWriting can be like exorcising the demons. And you dont even have to share it. Write it, and ball it up and throw it against the wall, or in the trash. Rage on until the poison is out of your heart.
ReplyDeleteVery well said. Writing is a therapy :)
DeletePowerful emotions captured and displayed here !
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
Deletethis acroustic is simple in its telling and requesting. Heartbreak is not a nice place to be. Your last line is absolutely refreshing
ReplyDeletemuch love...
Thanks Gillena :)
DeleteAlas.. the heartbreak is never painless.. good idea with an acrostic
ReplyDeleteThanks Bjorn :)
DeleteIn the end, it is going to be all right. You will realize that these heart breaks were to make you evolve into a more stronger being than you ever were.
ReplyDeleteCheer up :)
Thats true... Hopefully :)
DeleteThanks :)
The words have magic and wisdom of themselves! Heal and empower! Important choice of acrostic form!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteGlad that you liked it :)
"Heartbreak makes me write"---ah, yes, there is hardly a better muse, is there?
ReplyDeleteDefinitely not!
DeleteThanks :)
It is a hard place to be, heartbreak. But life does get better.
ReplyDeleteHopefully!
DeleteOh I love great acrostics and this is definitely one with a fabulous opening line!
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
Thanks Donna :)
DeleteSaddening.. but time always brings answers and new people.
ReplyDeleteThanks Natasa :)
DeleteEvery line is beautiful! This is the first time I am reading 'acrostic' type of poetry! I didn't know about this!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Sandhya...
DeleteI am glad that you liked it :)
Yet we all go through it in someway. Great poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteFact but hard to accept as reality !
ReplyDeleteBut life moves on :)
DeleteAcrostics are great forms. Strong feelings often make us be better poets. This is sad when the emotions are due to hardships.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Gabriella... Sometimes certain words themselves evoke strong feelings - like this one!
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