Sunday, 6 September 2015

I Want Them All

Blue, black and brown
Pink, red and orange
I want them all.
I want them all.
Cried little Gabriel

Oh my dear doll
You have them all
Said her mother
Helplessly.
Desperately

But little Gabriel
Wailed and whined.
I want them all
I want them all
Those shoes. I want them all!!!

50 comments:

  1. She has got the shoe fad early has she? What a collection she will have!

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  2. A great piece indeed, greetings!

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  3. Even if she had them all would she stop wailing? I think you show us the answer perfectly...

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  4. nothing can stop that yell...she feels like doing that...

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  5. Wailing children often end up getting everything that they want.

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    1. Who should be blamed, I wonder. the child or the parents?
      Thanks Sanaa :)

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  6. This made me smile...my daughter loved shoes from the time she was able to walk! She still loves them to this day. :)

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  7. Little Gabriel seems a bit spoiled to me! I hope she doesn't get everything she wants.

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    1. Its bad if someone gets everything they wish for!
      Thanks Mary :)

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  8. I have met her--she has a very short concentration span and a long suffering mother. There is no end to this poem! If a song, we could keep adding verses. Bravo!

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  9. Hahaha! A little girl's cute little tantrum. This gave me a day's worth of belly laughs :D

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  10. I thought "Gabriel" is a boy's name!

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    1. Yes... Gabriel is boy and Gabrielle is girl... But I thought whats there in the spelling... Oops!

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  11. It starts early, that crave for shoes

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  12. Want, want, want..instant gratification...oh we are all so spoiled I think.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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    1. After all, human wants are unlimited!

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  14. LOL, I can see this. I was picturing colorful balloons till I found out it was shoes.

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  15. This is a treat. At first I thought it was flowers, Gabriel wanted. When I discovered it was shoes, I couldn't help smiling!

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    1. Flowers... I nevere thought of it...
      Thanks :)

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  16. I want them all
    I want them all
    YO....

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  17. But i find this very sweet :)

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  18. this is really cute!
    lighthearted and fun to read.

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  19. sometimes when things are colorful, they become so tantalizing that we want them all! hehe...cute poem.

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  20. Oh the problems that have started.

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  21. Some people are like that about shoes. :)

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  22. Kids always want more because they are a all about self. Some grow out of it . This made me think of those without though

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    1. When I wrote this, I hate those unfortunate kids in my mind... And the thankless ones who are never satisfied!

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