Blue, black and brown
Pink, red and orange
I want them all.
I want them all.
Cried little Gabriel
Oh my dear doll
You have them all
Said her mother
Helplessly.
Desperately
But little Gabriel
Wailed and whined.
I want them all
I want them all
Those shoes. I want them all!!!
She has got the shoe fad early has she? What a collection she will have!
ReplyDeleteAh! A thought to ponder upon :)
DeleteA great piece indeed, greetings!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot :)
DeleteEven if she had them all would she stop wailing? I think you show us the answer perfectly...
ReplyDeleteI doubt that :)
DeleteThanks Jae
nothing can stop that yell...she feels like doing that...
ReplyDeleteAnd she will do it :D
DeleteWailing children often end up getting everything that they want.
ReplyDeleteWho should be blamed, I wonder. the child or the parents?
DeleteThanks Sanaa :)
This made me smile...my daughter loved shoes from the time she was able to walk! She still loves them to this day. :)
ReplyDeleteSame here Sherri... Thanks :)
DeleteLittle Gabriel seems a bit spoiled to me! I hope she doesn't get everything she wants.
ReplyDeleteIts bad if someone gets everything they wish for!
DeleteThanks Mary :)
I have met her--she has a very short concentration span and a long suffering mother. There is no end to this poem! If a song, we could keep adding verses. Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThanks Susan :)
DeleteHahaha! A little girl's cute little tantrum. This gave me a day's worth of belly laughs :D
ReplyDeleteI am happy that you liked it :)
DeleteI thought "Gabriel" is a boy's name!
ReplyDeleteYes... Gabriel is boy and Gabrielle is girl... But I thought whats there in the spelling... Oops!
DeleteIt starts early, that crave for shoes
ReplyDeleteWell said :)
DeleteWant, want, want..instant gratification...oh we are all so spoiled I think.
ReplyDeleteDonna@LivingFromHappiness
I think so too :P
DeleteEven when we get what we want, it is not often enough.
ReplyDeleteAt the Dead Man’s House
After all, human wants are unlimited!
DeleteLOL, I can see this. I was picturing colorful balloons till I found out it was shoes.
ReplyDeleteBalloons are good idea too :)
DeleteThis is a treat. At first I thought it was flowers, Gabriel wanted. When I discovered it was shoes, I couldn't help smiling!
ReplyDeleteFlowers... I nevere thought of it...
DeleteThanks :)
I want them all
ReplyDeleteI want them all
YO....
:)
DeleteI was this brat :P
ReplyDeleteAh! So it was you I saw :D
DeleteBut i find this very sweet :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jeevan :)
Deletethis is really cute!
ReplyDeletelighthearted and fun to read.
Thanks a lot Stacy :)
Deletesometimes when things are colorful, they become so tantalizing that we want them all! hehe...cute poem.
ReplyDeleteThanks James!
DeleteOh the problems that have started.
ReplyDeleteAh! Really ... (sighs)
DeleteThanks :)
Some people are like that about shoes. :)
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteAn interesting plot.
ReplyDeleteThanks Rudra :)
DeleteKids always want more because they are a all about self. Some grow out of it . This made me think of those without though
ReplyDeleteWhen I wrote this, I hate those unfortunate kids in my mind... And the thankless ones who are never satisfied!
DeleteAmazing lines :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Anjali :)
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