Sunday, 27 September 2015

Miles with Smiles

Together they walked
Hand in hand
Step by step
And
Their shoulders brushed
She blushed.
He noticed
They smiled


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42 comments:

  1. Jae RoseSeptember 27, 2015 5:58 pm

    This feels like sharing happy moment...wonderful as it was!

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherSeptember 27, 2015 6:02 pm

    Simple, and oh so sweet!

    Seeking Sugar

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  3. MarySeptember 27, 2015 6:23 pm

    Sounds like the beginning of something special....

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  4. MarySeptember 27, 2015 6:23 pm

    Hope you will be able to make visits to others this week....

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    1. LocomenteOctober 19, 2015 1:34 pm

      I am strying Mary... I will surely get back to the routine!

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  5. Rosemary Nissen-WadeSeptember 27, 2015 6:52 pm

    A novelette in verse.

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  6. Sumana RoySeptember 27, 2015 7:19 pm

    sweet :)

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  7. brudbergSeptember 27, 2015 8:29 pm

    That blushing sends signals better than most.

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  8. Gillena CoxSeptember 27, 2015 8:46 pm

    this is so nice, a lovely frieze in time

    have a nice Sunday
    much love...

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  9. De JacksonSeptember 27, 2015 9:22 pm

    Love the title, and the soft feelings that "brushed/blushed" evokes.

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  10. Sherry Blue SkySeptember 27, 2015 10:33 pm

    Ha, those early moments of awareness, well captured.

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  11. NatašekSeptember 27, 2015 11:49 pm

    lovely feeling.

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  12. tonispencerSeptember 28, 2015 12:00 am

    What a sweet (in the best sense) poem and such a swift joy. Spencer is Kanzensakura.

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  13. HardiSeptember 28, 2015 12:30 am

    A lovely moment :)

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  14. J.N.T.September 28, 2015 12:41 am

    Cupid draw back your bow and let your arrow flow-------straight to my lover's heart for meeeeeeeee!!! that's the soundtrack for your poem my dear. always full of rainbows, butterflies, and smiles...cheers!!!

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    1. LocomenteOctober 19, 2015 1:41 pm

      I had never heard it before... But now I did...
      And I liked it :)

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  15. Sanaa RizviSeptember 28, 2015 12:56 am

    Awwww... so romantic!! :D :D

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  16. DonnaSeptember 28, 2015 1:28 am

    Oh I loved this sweet little poem...a moment caught on this page.

    Donna@LivingFromHappiness

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  17. RenuSeptember 28, 2015 10:51 am

    wonderful walk:)

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  18. SusanSeptember 29, 2015 12:52 am

    Brushed/blushed/smiled--seems to be the most natural progression in the world. Happily.

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  19. Wendy BourkeSeptember 29, 2015 4:24 am

    This is so charming and tender - truly romantic. A lovely little piece.

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    1. LocomenteOctober 19, 2015 1:43 pm

      Thanks a lot...
      I am so happy that you liked it :)

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  20. Boisterous BeeSeptember 29, 2015 2:27 pm

    That is cute.. you gotta tell me, how do you write such cute stuff??

    Cheers

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    1. LocomenteOctober 19, 2015 1:44 pm

      When boredom strikes, I wander in dreamland...
      And such posts emerge...
      It, however, becomes beautiful cz of readers like you :)

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  21. rudraprayagaSeptember 30, 2015 11:01 pm

    Signals of love.Good read.

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  22. Ankita October 05, 2015 2:27 pm

    really good! loved it :)

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