Monday, 2 April 2012

Deserted


I feel deserted and cursed
My life loses its sheen and colors
Without seeing your mesmerising smile!!!

As a part of Haiku Challenge
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5 comments:

  1. Jen..The Butterfly EffectApril 03, 2012 12:03 am

    You are going to get over this storm! :)

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  2. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 03, 2012 4:07 am

    Is feeling deserted better than actually being deserted? :)

    Deserted Branches

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  3. ChèvrefeuilleApril 03, 2012 4:41 am

    I think this is the first time I visit your blog ... and I am glad I did. This is a wonderful blog.
    I love the haiku you have written.

    Namaste

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  4. Sri ValliApril 03, 2012 8:37 am

    Hey dear...great to see you participating in haiku challenge...Your expressions are very good...But check out syllable count...
    It should be in 5-7-5 or 3-5-3 format :)

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  5. LocomenteApril 03, 2012 8:45 am

    Thanks all... Am elated that you liked...

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