Romancing words!!!
It's well expressed but perhaps for a haiku too many syllables..you may like to recheck the last line..
Its updated... I did not knw that non-alphabets will also be counted
very inspiring :)
I enjoyed this haiku of yours. My favorite lines is "befriend success" I, too, would like to do that.
content is excellent ~ wonder about haiku form ~
Hey... I think this is 5-7-5 form...
Befriend success, is a great message. Here's hoing it works for you!
Beautiful lines dear...:)But check out syllable count...To know how many syllables a word has goto thefreedictionary.comyou can search for word and check the syllables...For example ...enough has two syllables e-nough harder has two syllables hard-erDon't count the whole word as a one syllable...Hope this information helps you :)
Oh, darn! Can't I have hope without working harder?Tell Me, Sister Crow
عش كل لحظة كأنها آخر لحظة في حياتك،عش بالإيمان،عش بالكفاح،عش بالحب،عش بالأمل،وقدر قيمة الحياةLive every moment like the last moment in your lifeLive by FaithLive by StruggleLive by LoveLive by HopeEstimated value of life
It's well expressed but perhaps for a haiku too many syllables..you may like to recheck the last line..
ReplyDeleteIts updated... I did not knw that non-alphabets will also be counted
ReplyDeletevery inspiring :)
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed this haiku of yours. My favorite lines is "befriend success" I, too, would like to do that.
ReplyDeletecontent is excellent ~ wonder about haiku form ~
ReplyDeleteHey... I think this is 5-7-5 form...
ReplyDeleteBefriend success, is a great message. Here's hoing it works for you!
ReplyDeleteBeautiful lines dear...:)
ReplyDeleteBut check out syllable count...
To know how many syllables a word has goto thefreedictionary.com
you can search for word and check the syllables...
For example ...enough has two syllables e-nough harder has two syllables hard-er
Don't count the whole word as a one syllable...Hope this information helps you :)
Oh, darn! Can't I have hope without working harder?
ReplyDeleteTell Me, Sister Crow
عش كل لحظة كأنها آخر لحظة في حياتك،عش بالإيمان،عش بالكفاح،عش بالحب،عش بالأمل،وقدر قيمة الحياة
ReplyDeleteLive every moment like the last moment in your life
Live by Faith
Live by Struggle
Live by Love
Live by Hope
Estimated value of life