Monday, 9 April 2012

Seashore


Water travels miles and miles
Feels content on reaching seashore - Destiny
Am travelling towards my destiny

As a part of Haiku Challenge

3 comments:

  1. This is a good expression, a nice thought..on a beautiful journey.. but you may like to look at syllables if you want it to be a haiku.. Thanks!!!

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  2. Lovely words and creative expression ~ this Haiku site looks for the 5-7-5 syllables, 3 lines ~ although there are many types of haiku ~ thanks, namaste, ^_^

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