Friday, 27 April 2012

Temptation

Endless Temptation
Though you have moved away
To hold you back with me
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Endless Temptation
To be with you and grow very old
But hey… where are you?
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Yes… I may fall ill
But the unending temptation
To lick an ice cream
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Unending Temptation
Though I am a gracious lady
To act like a man
As a part of Haiku Challenge

12 comments:

  1. superbly written loco...that was tooooooooo good...loved it... <3 <3 :)

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  2. Loved them.

    Ice cream is really temptation, I can eat it in cold too...:), I was about to write on the same..theme.

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  3. its so nice ... very b'ful ... i dont have words..i liked it too much .. awesome blossom :)

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  4. Enjoyed your haiku very much. Each one so true about temptations.

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  5. Well done ~ lots to think about ~ ^_^

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  6. These are all great, but the last one made mee chuckle. well done.

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  7. Thank you all...
    Happier coz you all liked my last one... Which happens to be my favorite!!!

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  8. Like you writing style!, a request,please turn off word verification if possible..

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  9. Hey Jaideep...
    I have rmoved the word verification I suppose...
    thanks for the gracious comments...
    And happy reading!!!

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  10. Very beautiful set!...Very relatable examples!
    missing your comments on my blog -_-
    Temptation

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