Friday, 13 April 2012

Warmth


The melting warmth I feel
When my mother draws me close to her
And shelters from World
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7 comments:

  1. PranitaApril 13, 2012 9:51 am

    Nothin comparable to a mother's warmth! Very nice..

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  2. Diana TenevaApril 13, 2012 2:31 pm

    Mother's love and warmth always protect and shelter us!!! Nice haiku!
    Well done!!!

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  3. Preeti S.April 13, 2012 7:23 pm

    Beautiful.. :)

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  4. PattiKenApril 13, 2012 9:08 pm

    There is no warmth or safety to equal that found in the arms of a mother.

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  5. Tarang SinhaApril 13, 2012 10:30 pm

    This is really beautiful! But as per rules of haiku, syllable count is more than required:)

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  6. Ramesh SoodApril 13, 2012 11:41 pm

    Good thought..very nice.. but as Tarang has mentioned..you may like to look at syllable and reduce a few words...

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  7. AlcinaApril 14, 2012 6:28 pm

    Nothing compared to this warmth.Beautiful words. :)

    Alcina-Afixxion Addixt

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