Sunday, 28 April 2013

Beads of Tears


Beads of tears
Escaped her eyes
Pain was in her heart
She didn’t know how to restart
She stared at the velvety sky above
An unknown fear started to grow
A soothing touch is all she wanted
But from whom; she felt abandoned
That was when heavens tore
And cried along to console
As the chill liquid touched
She smiled as if tickled
The liquid then kissed her
Embraced her
And drenched her
Beads of tears
Escaped her eyes
Happiness filled in her heart

As a part of One single Impression




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18 comments:

  1. KISLAYA GOPALApril 28, 2013 8:24 pm

    This is Superb. Nature can heal with all its heart if we take the cue.
    I loved this poem of yours.

    I have nominated you for liebster blog award. Please see my blog, thanx :)

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  2. AnonymousApril 29, 2013 1:23 pm

    This is beautiful I find nature very therapeutic and sometimes honestly I just need a good cry

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  3. Harshad MehtaApril 29, 2013 2:14 pm

    Very calming. That is how prayers work!

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  4. Vandana SharmaApril 29, 2013 3:36 pm

    beautifully carved piece.

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  5. MaryApril 29, 2013 3:55 pm

    Just beautiful.

    Welcome to Poetry Pantry.

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  6. Rosemary Nissen-WadeApril 29, 2013 4:01 pm

    A cathartic experience!

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  7. Lisa A. WilliamsApril 29, 2013 5:06 pm

    So lovely! Tears can be so healing as can nature.

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  8. Jacqueline HowettApril 29, 2013 7:57 pm

    I enjoyed your well organized poem and how you captured so much than tears!

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  9. Stormcat PoetryApril 29, 2013 11:17 pm

    A poem about tears shaped like a teardrop just as it's starting to land. I like how it calls up the raindrops as teardrops of empathy poured out from the heavens to heal you. This is a great poem that will resonate with many people.

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  10. alan1704April 30, 2013 3:09 am

    I loved this, really beautifully written and something romantically magical within it. It is just wonderful

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  11. The Write GirlApril 30, 2013 6:03 am

    I just love the imagery here, the surrender to nature and heaven, and finally breaking through her sadness. Beautifully written.

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  12. hyperCRYPTICalApril 30, 2013 1:50 pm

    Lovely - mankind has the potential to harm - nature the potential to heal.

    Anna :o]

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  13. SuzyMay 01, 2013 12:37 pm

    Beautiful - Blessings and comfort from above. I loved that.
    Dropping by from the Poetry Pantry

    Suzy at http://ilasoulpoems.blogspot.co.nz/

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  14. Gillena CoxMay 06, 2013 6:00 am

    so much empathy from nature; the persona surrenders and almost melts in with the rain


    much love...

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  15. TCPCMay 06, 2013 2:13 pm

    move on! WELL WRITTEN...

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  16. LocomenteMay 06, 2013 3:40 pm

    Thank you all for your comments... :)

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  17. Easwar ArumugamMay 08, 2013 4:40 pm

    nice, touching poetry

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