Friday, 12 April 2013

Jailed!



Viewers were happy
Seeing colorful fishes
Are fishes happy?

Oh! They are away
From their natural abode
Because they are jailed
PS: In any case, I know that I am happy. After all, this is my 125th Haiku. All the thanks go to Haiku Heights. It has been my source of motivation!
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6 comments:

  1. Ramesh SoodApril 12, 2013 3:45 pm

    You said it...now I know why I always had a feeling of discomfort whenever I saw a fish pond...Thanks a lot.. lovely haiku...

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/04/she-sits-on-edge-haiku.html?showComment=1365759665477

    RS

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  2. NankaApril 12, 2013 4:00 pm

    My opinion is that the fish are happy in water especially the smaller variety wherever they may be!! The koi pond can be a blissful life for them!!

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  3. Sankara Jayanth SApril 12, 2013 7:48 pm

    Indeed. I myself wonder about that very much. About all animals that we domesticate. Having been a friend of three fish that were eaten by a wild cat from the bowl, I have always questioned myself. A brilliant haiku. Loved it.
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    If you'd like to read mine, here it is: http://wp.me/p1QKRs-WP

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  4. AnonymousApril 12, 2013 10:06 pm

    A fish out of water will not survive. Well writen

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  5. LLM CallingApril 12, 2013 10:49 pm

    can anyone be happy when constrained
    http://llmcalling.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/care-for-his-world-napowrimodaytwelve.html

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  6. AnonymousApril 13, 2013 2:26 am

    Fish in jail? Good one.

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