Friday, 26 April 2013

Killer Smile!


When you go and stand
Near humongous waterfall
Water sprays on face

Water sprays on face
And it gives a childish joy
Even your heart smiles

Even my heart smiles
Whenever you near me, love
With that killer smile!

As a part of Haiku Challenge

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4 comments:

  1. NankaApril 26, 2013 12:23 am

    Very romantic coupled with beauty in the first two!!

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  2. KISLAYA GOPALApril 26, 2013 12:44 am

    Wow, literally somehow it is all smiles and love ! ha ha :) :)
    Beautifully written 'humongous watrfall', 'childish joy', 'killer smile' !
    Enjoyed it!

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  3. AnonymousApril 26, 2013 1:47 am

    This Is fun and romantic all at once. Made me smile.

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  4. Amrit SinhaApril 27, 2013 12:16 pm

    Ah, so the smile killed the heart under the waterfall :P

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