Wednesday, 24 April 2013

Sinned



“Go. I disown you”
Said father; He was angry.
As she had eloped

She was angry too
"But what sin I committed"
She asked with tears

Oh! He trusted her
And she didn't regret it
Isn't that a sin?

As a part of Haiku Challenge

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6 comments:

  1. ekta khetanApril 24, 2013 1:04 pm

    Hmmmm Hmmmm

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  2. AnonymousApril 24, 2013 10:18 pm

    Such a sad story =( I am fortunate my mom loves my husband and supported my marriage wholeheartedly

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  3. AnonymousApril 25, 2013 2:54 am

    What a sad story. All in haiku. Good job.

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  4. LLM CallingApril 25, 2013 12:52 pm

    such sadness and yet so common.in families. oh to forgive

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  5. KISLAYA GOPALApril 25, 2013 6:21 pm

    Yes it is, trust should never be broken especially of parents', as they love us a lot and give us everything they can, without expecting!

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  6. Amrit SinhaApril 27, 2013 1:45 am

    A brilliant story ... you bring out a very delicate question here ... who is right and who is wrong ... we have no answer ... well done !!!

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