Monday, 22 April 2013

You Never Leave Me



You love me so much?
Because you never leave me
Always stand by me

And then you follow
At times you scare me indeed
Still I love you lots

And I will miss you
When I am left in darkness
Without your presence

As a part of Haiku Challenge

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6 comments:

  1. Amrit SinhaApril 22, 2013 12:07 am

    Ah the last stanza is so true ... loved it :D

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  2. Sri ValliApril 22, 2013 12:19 pm

    I too loved the last stanza...touching!

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  3. NankaApril 22, 2013 1:41 pm

    An adorable stalker!! Delightful the first two!!

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  4. AnonymousApril 22, 2013 2:15 pm

    Continued journey. Good haiku.

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  5. AnonymousApril 22, 2013 6:22 pm

    This is so cute =)

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  6. KISLAYA GOPALApril 23, 2013 2:38 am

    You have written it very beautifully Satya. Yes the last one is similar to what I wrote as you have mentioned in my blog, but the first two are equally amazing and true! Loved your take :)

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