Thursday, 9 May 2013

Near Me...

Really, we can restart
Everything will be fine
Knowing you
I am sure
Dear, love is still lingering in air
Near me and please
L eave me never
Ever…! L



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8 comments:

  1. KISLAYA GOPALMay 09, 2013 2:12 am

    Oh how sweet way to enchant your lover back!! :)

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  2. Ramesh SoodMay 12, 2013 9:58 pm

    Very touching..some craving visible there...somehow that what is love..always stays....doesn't matter if returns or not...its presence can always be felt..

    Do visit me here.. http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/05/and-stories-all-spillhaiku.html

    RS

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    1. LocomenteMay 12, 2013 11:04 pm

      Thanks a ton sir... your comments means a lot to me..very true sir..
      Love needs to b felt.... tats all

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  3. Pam OlsonMay 12, 2013 11:04 pm

    Thank you for sharing this poem-- very heartfelt longing.

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  4. Maggie GraceMay 13, 2013 2:11 am

    I have never tried an acrostic poem. Nicely done and I adore the photo!

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    1. LocomenteMay 13, 2013 3:22 pm

      Thanks Maggie... I am telling you... This genre is addictive!

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